Jennifer

​​​ 6/16 / 10   __Free Write__ It was Sunday morning and I was going to Coney Island. I was so happy because I got to take my brand new bathing suit. My mom was waking up and my dad was waking up too. I told them that I was going to get ready so that when we live we are ready and steady. My mom told me to take a bath so I would be fresh when we come out of the house. I told her that if I took a bath right now I am going to get dirty with the sand and the ocean water. My mom changed her mind and she said that I don't have to take a bath. When my brother woke up we all brushed our teeth and we got our beach bags ready. My mom got the sunscreen out and she put some on me and my brother. When we were all ready to go my dad said that we had to go on a train. My dad said the trains we were going to take were train 7 and train F. When we got out of our house we walked to the train station. The first train we took was train 7. We got down at 74 st broadway. The next train we got on was train F. Train F took us all the way to Coney Island. When we got of the train we saw the CYCLONE. I wanted to go to that game but the note said" People who are 54 years old could only go to the CYCLONE. I told my dad if he goes with me to the CYCLONE that if they would still let me go? My dad said "NO" because he was not 54 years old. I was very sad.